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i am wind-blown, auster eschewed;
like the seed fluffs that i pursue
i ride the chuff with speed undue.
leonine, spring is roaring gruff;
like the seed fluffs i ride the chuff.
like the seed fluffs that i pursue
i ride the chuff with speed undue.
leonine, spring is roaring gruff;
like the seed fluffs i ride the chuff.
23.02.17
a cinquain refrain
the wind was a bitch biking to work this afternoon...but coming home i made scarily great time, though no so good as the seed fluff outpacing me...
a cinquain refrain
the wind was a bitch biking to work this afternoon...but coming home i made scarily great time, though no so good as the seed fluff outpacing me...
cinquain refrain tutorialthe cinquain refrain, not to be confused with the cinquain, is a form i devised after playing with refrain forms like the monotetra and the trijan refrain.
here is the rundown:
- there are 5 lines per stanza (no minimum or limit to the number of stanzas)
- there are eight syllables per line.
- lines 1,2, and 3 rhyme with one another
- lines 4 and 5 rhyme with one another
- there is an internal rhyme concerning the first 4 syllables of lines 2 and 3: they must be phrases that rhyme with one another. they must also rhyme with line 4.
- the first four syllables of lines 2 and 3 are refrained, in order, to create line 5.
in the template below, the numbers indicate the number of syllables per line, and the uppercase letters in parentheses indicate the rhymes. this pattern is repeated for each stanza, though it is not necessary to use the same rhymes in each stanza.
8 (A)
4 (B) 4 (A) (for a total of 8 sylls)
4 (B) 4 (A) (for a total of 8 sylls)
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Nice rhyme scheme!