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rust: a haiga by haijinik rust: a haiga by haijinik
a haiga collaboration with with offermoord seeded by his original artwork Rust.

the poem is a sijo:

we've speared our collective foot on apathy's rusty nail,
and insured an infection through forgetfulness and doubt...
societal tetanus will be our slow undoing.
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:iconrhunel:
rhunel Featured By Owner May 22, 2017   General Artist
Well done!
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:iconsilvernium:
silvernium Featured By Owner Mar 18, 2017  Hobbyist Writer
rust is the crust we choose to tread upon,
a foot goes through to an unsure footing,
the bread now baked is like the bed now made.
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:iconhaijinik:
haijinik Featured By Owner Mar 19, 2017  Student Writer
the fragile strata,
filigreed with perception,
obstruct osmosis.
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:iconsilvernium:
silvernium Featured By Owner Mar 19, 2017  Hobbyist Writer
Seems like someone needs to knock this into a collab? :)

P.S. I can't watch that link you sent me yet (on work pc). Just to let you know I know it is there and I'll get too it (maybe not for a day or two, very busy .. ).
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:iconhaijinik:
haijinik Featured By Owner Mar 23, 2017  Student Writer
i get busy :)

and as to collab...is it done? or are there forthcoming noted bits?
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:iconsilvernium:
silvernium Featured By Owner Mar 23, 2017  Hobbyist Writer
I'd say it's done .. needs a title as usual!
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:iconhaijinik:
haijinik Featured By Owner Mar 23, 2017  Student Writer
hmmm...blueprint recipe?
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:iconsilvernium:
silvernium Featured By Owner Mar 23, 2017  Hobbyist Writer
Sounds good to me
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:iconhaijinik:
haijinik Featured By Owner Mar 25, 2017  Student Writer
;) sorry it took me so long. i have been bouncing between work and performances and rehearsals of 12 angry men in dutch for the past two weeks. sunday afternoon is the last show!
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:iconoffermoord:
offermoord Featured By Owner Mar 15, 2017
Good work :clap:
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:iconhaijinik:
haijinik Featured By Owner Mar 15, 2017  Student Writer
thanks! i accepted the request you sent...but i thought i submitted it to featured like i was supposed to...maybe i just thought i did :)
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:iconoffermoord:
offermoord Featured By Owner Mar 15, 2017
You're right, it's from the PLAYGROUND, it should be in featured.
I cannot change it, I don't have that kinda power at FLY-LTD :(
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:iconhaijinik:
haijinik Featured By Owner Mar 16, 2017  Student Writer
no biggie :) i was just thinking with my keyboard :)
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